Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Why is My Research Topic Important

John Lauer
ENGL 250
Research Thoughts
3/25/14
Why is My Topic Important?
  1)      My research paper, Technical Communications in Mechanical Engineering, is important to me because it includes a complete overview of writing and presenting in the mechanical engineering field. This is beneficial to me, as it will be a resource I can use later in my college career and on that can help me remember all the guidelines of technical writing in my field. Other people in my field can benefit from it too, so this is important to other people too if the information gets out to them.

  2)      One of the biggest issues I am having is organizing the essay. All the information incorporated somewhat repeats throughout the essay, as writing is common through a lot of different types of technical writing. So I’ll have to determine what I want to include in each in depth review of each type of technical writing. It’s a work in process and I hope it turns out well!  

Monday, March 10, 2014

Bibliography for Research Paper

Bibliography
Banuazizi, Atissa. Creating Your BE.109 Presentation. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, 15 Mar. 2006. PDF.
What do you want your reader to remember about your talk? Remind your reader of primary findings. Explain what these findings contribute to the field. Those three topics in the sentences before, along with the basics of good presentations, and the concepts behind the effective approach of presenting information are in this source. These are all concepts that this presentation goes over and focuses on to help other engineers produce effective presentations.
Cheng, Wai K. A Guide to Writing 2.672 Analytical Reports. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, Fall 2007. PDF.
This document is intended to highlight what should be contained in lab reports for a specific course, but it can also be used to show the general setup of any good lab report. This document assumes you are familiar with writing lab reports from previous classes. It builds on that knowledge while pointing to some key differences. In particular, the focus of lab reports is on the theoretical model you develop, not on the experiments you do to test it. This is intended for college students who are writing lab reports for classes.
Gopsill, James A., Hamish C. McAlpine, and Ben J. Hicks. "A Social Media Framework to Support Engineering Design Communication." ScienceDirect. Advanced Engineering Informatics, Oct. 2013. Web. 3 Mar. 2014. <http://ejournals.ebsco.com.proxy.lib.iastate.edu/Direct.asp?AccessToken=95J5XIX8XIRIDK5551ZI1EUUQP5P8DM4Q&Show=Object>.
Engineering Design Communication (EDC) is fundamental to almost all Engineering Design activities as it provides the ability for knowledge and information to be shared between engineers. This communication contains a great deal of rationale relating to the evolution of Product Development and is essential for understanding the product and the reason for its design. The need to support EDC is becoming more important due to the fact that Product Development is becoming more distributed, multi-disciplinary and involving greater re-use of past designs. With the advent of social media, it is argued that there is the technical capability to provide more effective support for EDC within a computer-mediated environment. In order to explore this potential, this paper defines the requirements for the effective support of EDC through an extensive review of the literature. It then discusses the suitability of a social media approach and then presents the theoretical foundations of a social media framework to support EDC.
Hunter, Ian W., and Barbara Hughey. Instructions for Using Your Laboratory Notebook. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, 5 June 2007. PDF.
“Keeping a complete and accurate record of experimental methods and data is a vital part of science and engineering. Your laboratory notebook is a permanent record of what you did and what you observed in the laboratory. Learning to keep a good notebook now will establish good habits that will serve you throughout your career. Your notebook should include recording of what you do, and why you did it. It is extremely important that your notebook accurately record everything you did. A good test of your work is the following question: could someone else, with an equivalent technical background to your own, use your notebook to repeat your work, and obtain the same results? For that matter, could you come back six months later, read your notes, and make sense of them? If you can answer yes to these two questions, you are keeping a good notebook. It is also important to maintain a good laboratory notebook in order to protect your intellectual property. An appropriately maintained laboratory notebook can often mean the difference between gaining or not gaining recognition for a discovery. U.S. patent law states that inventor-ship is determined by the "first to invent," not the "first to file." The laboratory notebook can be the key piece of evidence in helping to make that determination.” This key paragraph from this source explains all that it focused on in this paper. It goes over good practices with lab books and gives the ins and outs of how to be a good student when it comes to reporting labs.
Kelley, Nicole. Sentence Structure of Technical Writing. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, Fall 2006. PDF.
The main focus of this presentation is to show how engineers should write in a formal manner. It goes over steps such as: Plan your project before you begin drafting, Understand basic qualities of good technical writing, use the examples presented to guide you in your writing and revising process, Good writing is a habit that takes time to develop, and practice makes perfect. This is obviously for engineers to look over.
Lauer, James. "Communication in an Engineering Career." Telephone interview. Mar. 2014.
I interviewed James Lauer, a Senior Manager at Caterpillar Inc. in charge of teaching new managers the position and certain engineering techniques. This man does a lot of presentations and teaching which deals with communication. So the interview consisted of questions about his job and communication plays a role overall and day to day. I also asked about any troubles he has with communication at times. I also ask about each of the five general technical communications I was researching and how he has used those from back in college to now in his full career. This was very interesting information and really showed how basic knowledge of these communication styles and really help you over your whole career as a college student and a full engineer.
McKinley, Gareth H. Some Helpful Hints in Preparing Scientific-Quality Plots for Reports by Hand or by Using Excel. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, Spring 2004. PDF.
Excel is a wonderful tool for rapidly manipulating laboratory data. However it is helpful to remember that it was designed with accountants in mind, not scientists. It is really configured to manipulate financial data, and this is reflected in the names used for many items. It takes some significant effort to make data tables and plots into the form that is acceptable for reporting scientific data. Even with this extra effort, the results are marginal at best. So this essay focuses on help with excel and how it can be used in a helpful way when trying to use it to reports findings in the form of graphs. All the helpful hints give college students some much needed guidance to help them produce professional looking reports.
Perelman, Leslie C. Effective Oral Presentations. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, n.d. PDF.
This presentation goes of many basic rules that are very crucial to an effective oral presentation. It covers topics like preparing the talk, knowing and analyzing the audience, the introduction, the time, the conclusion, and the look of your visual. It also shows the perils of PowerPoint and how to make your presentation the most effective. This is for helping all engineers present data and results in a presentation so that it is easy to understand and present.
Poe, Mya. Effective Written Communication: Storyboarding a Technical Report. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, Sept. 2005. PDF.
The goal of oral presentations and written reports is to explain a technical finding of the information you are reporting. The power point gives good guidelines to writing presentations and written reports so that they are effective to your audience, they have good sentence structure, properly organized data, and explanation of said data. This is for all engineers.
Sample Problem and General Advice for Homework. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, 24 Oct. 2001. PDF.
The purpose of this handout is to give you a sample problem and some advice for writing problem sets in all engineering fields. The attached solution shows you one way that the homework can be written.  This does not mean that your homework has to look identical. This sample is merely a guide.  However, keep in mind that you can receive full credit only when you show clearly what you did.  In engineering you must get the right answer and present it clearly. This shows a good example of problems engineers will encounter and how to properly set them up and answer them. This is for college students in engineering.
"Technical Communications in Mechanical Engineering." Technical Communications in Mechanical Engineering. MechE Department, n.d. Web. 03 Mar. 2014. <http://web.mit.edu/meugoffice/communication/>.
Engineering work is critically dependent upon communication skills. Engineers must be able to report their ideas and designs clearly to their coworkers, supervisors, and customers. The format of engineering communications can vary widely, from summaries of calculations, to short technical memos, to complete written reports, to oral presentations, to drawings describing data or machinery. The undergraduate curricula of the MechE Department include instruction in all of these formats. The main focus of this site is to provide an information highway to engineering students who need guidance with technical writing in the mechanical engineering field. The audience is for all engineers and specifically mechanical engineers that may or may not be students.
The Preparation of Engineering Problem Sets. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, Mar. 2002. PDF.
These documents describe basic guidelines for formatting problem sets. This guide is for teaching students how to correctly format your problem sets in an organized fashion. These guidelines may be different for other teachers and schools, but are a good base for starting problem sets properly. The audience is students in engineering.
Wilson, David G. Wilson’s Guide for the Preparation of Theses, Reports, Articles, and Papers. Cambridge: MIT Mechanical Engineering Office, n.d. PDF.
Writing, presenting orally, or a report are all ways you can formally transfer information. These are some simple overall rules for optimum information transfer, a framework that might help you to put these rules into practice, and some rules of grammar. This guide just gives a short overview of the basic for main topics of what to focus on certain reports and papers. This is for students in engineering.

Monday, March 3, 2014

Research Paper Proposal

John Lauer
ENGL 250
Research Proposal
3/3/14
Technical Communications in Mechanical Engineering
               As many majors in college have, writing is a substantial skill that every college student must be sufficient in. This forces students to be active in learning to write better and specifically better in the styles and formats that they must write in for their specific major. Each major has a different writing style, along with different setups of memos, reports, presentations, and drawings that must be done in the correct format. How will other students in the mechanical engineering field know how to produce this writing? Obviously they will learn over time, but what better way to learn a lot in the beginning of your college career then to read a research paper giving a quick crash course of what kinds of technical writing will come up in the mechanical engineering field and how you should deal with them when the time comes to write them.
               My topic for research is “Technical Communications in Mechanical Engineering” and answers the question, “What technical writing do Mechanical Engineers do?” So the paper will go over five general types of communication that mechanical engineers encounter, which is the following: Problem Sets, Written reports, Oral Reports, Lab and Design Notebooks, and Graphical Presentation and Technical Material. The paper will cover the general concept of each writing style and communication technique, along with an explanation of the format of each of how they should be written and some tips on communicating with each communication style. So the technical and conceptual side of writing will be touched on so to help whoever is reading to actually produce quality writing in each format. Each of these have a very good chance of showing up in college and a future job as a mechanical engineer, so the write up of all of these together will help give a small refresher course of these different communications.
               This paper will be written with specific research from the internet from different credible sites, along with some scholarly sources, and some interviews with mechanical engineers. All of this will be pulled together to produce a very direct research paper that will be a great source to use when needing a reminder about these communication styles.